Finish it and repost, you're onto something but this doesn't even amount to a trailer.

the same gag like 5 times...

placeholder my ass

i was ready to 0 the vid without voting when i realized it was clock related, but on a whim i thought i'd give it a fair shake. and i get a placeholder? if you can't even remember to make your own video before submitting it... (i won't even touch that) then odds are it wont be front-page, or i hope not anyway. oh wait i have to be constructive... at least you spelled nearly everything correctly. kudos.

it had some flaws but...

it wasn't perfect but it was quite good. keep up the great work

it looks -alright-

as a dressup game it's decent, but a bit boring to actually play.

not bad, loops very well.

You sound too subdued, especially for high bpm free-styling. The song is called Boundless Rage so show us that anger.
Also, even the best rappers muddle their flows in a feestyle, but it should sound like you are trying to hold your speed back to match the song, not desperately keep up with it.
Try recording your lyrics first with absolutely no beat or accompaniment. Get in tune with your own rhythm and flow, in hip hop your words should be dictating the beat, not the other way around.
Also, you sound like you're worried about bothering the neighbors. If you want to rap, fuck your neighbors and let yourself go.